Monday, March 10, 2014

Frozen - Chapter 1

Introduction
This is my first Frozen fanfic. I uploaded it on FanFiction.net on March 9, 2014. I haven't yet decided how the story is going to turn out. But anyways, I have another Frozen fanfic that is in progress, but I'll wait awhile before I upload it.

Frozen
"Elsa! Wake up!" Anna banged on her older sister's door. "Wake up!"

After less than half a minute of banging the door, an alarmed Elsa quickly opened her eyes.

"Wake up!"

She sat up, reluctant to tiptoe towards the door.

"Elsa, I know why you're shutting me out," Anna told her. "I had a dream about it."

Elsa raised a brow. A dream told her?

"You don't have to be afraid of hurting anyone if the gloves will hinder it. Please come out!"

Elsa's eyes grew wide.

"Please! You don't have to afraid."

Elsa thought for a moment. Should she come out? Would reconciling with her be the best choice? What if just touching her could do harm? Elsa didn't want to hurt her, and if just touching her would cause damage, she wasn't willing. She wouldn't take a chance.

"Anna," she whispered. "I can't."

"Why not?"

"I'll hurt you. I don't want to take any risks. What if I caused you damage, or even your life, by just hugging you?"

"But...but then your gloves would have the same effect, which they don't," replied Anna.

"Please, Anna! I'm just trying to protect you."

"Elsa!" Anna whined. "You had control when we were little, and you weren't afraid."

Elsa hesitated. "I almost cost you your life because I wasn't, and with it I learned how dangerous I am."

"There's beauty in your magic, and you're not a monster. True monsters don't have beauty."

Elsa looked down, shut her eyes, and sighed. She didn't know what to do. Anna had a point, but she just couldn't risk hurting her.

"Anna, no. My final answer is no. Goodbye."



Trivia


  • My original idea was to include the dream sequences, which basically in written form shows what went on when Elsa and Anna were playing to when Elsa was told by Pabbie that there's beauty and great danger in her power.
  • When Anna says that "true monsters don't have beauty," she's referring to the person within, not on the outside. I mean, Hans is gorgeous and hid his true nature from Anna. I'm not sure where I'm going with this story yet, because I'm not sure how Hans should be portrayed.

Thursday, March 6, 2014

Possibility

Introduction
Possibility is a oneshot I wrote on May 21 of 2013, and I published it on FictionPress the following day. It is loosely based on one of the original songs written by my favorite YouTube singer, Tiffany Alvord. Click here to watch the music video and hear this beautiful and relatable song.

From my FictionPress account: I also had to ask for advice or an idea of a songfic, because I've seen so many out there that basically have the song lyrics in-between paragraphs of their story. I didn't want mine to be like that, so I give credit to Surf-merGirl1963.


Possibility
I looked up at the clock, sighing in relief at the thought of school ending in five minutes. I had been sitting here quietly for so long, although I'd say nothing even if I walked out of this classroom and building.

My eyes drifted to my left. I couldn't help it. He was such a sight to see. Just then, I saw his head turn and his eyes on me. I smiled and quickly looked away, back on the piece of paper that was in front of me. Of course, I wasn't writing anything, as I was finished. I was just waiting and, at the same time, thinking about him.

Imagine what it's like to be in such a mood where you're daydreaming, and it's suddenly interrupted when the school bell rings.

I got up, picked up my bag and walked out. Almost everyone left immediately, as there was a certain movie that just came out in theaters, and they were excited about it.
As I walked down the virtually empty hallway of the school to my locker, a couple went passed me. I couldn't help but look at the two as they held hands while in a deep conversation. I wish I was wrapped up in that moment.

I looked up to see a group, but the only person that caught my eye was Harry Walters, the most popular and handsome guy in school. One thing I mostly adored about him was that he was decent, somewhat formal and very charming. O, how I wish he were mine! But he was already taken. Taken by Catalina Howell, an average-looking, raven-haired C-student.

I opened my locker, and looked at him again. He was talking with his friends. Seeing him laugh and smile, simply just looking at him, made me smile and look on with genuine adornment. I was helpless as I chuckled.

Facing towards my locker, I realized I didn't need to be here. I didn't need anything, or if I did, I forgot. Oh, yeah: my bag. All I needed to do here was put my bag into my locker.

"Hey!" I heard, a friendly greeting. I looked up to my left. The voice belonged to Harry Walters, and it was him indeed. "Hey," I said in return, nervously of course. "How are you?" he asked. "Fine. I, um, saw you in school today. How did you know I was looking at you?" I asked.

He hesitated before answering. "Sometimes I could just tell. Are you saying I have extrasensory perception?"

Extrasensory perception? Er..."I don't know, I guess," was all I could say. I just thought of asking because it was weird. I mean, I can't tell if others are looking at me.

"Everyone here must be Twilight fans," I said, deciding to break the silence. "The hallway is usually filled after the bell rings."
"Today's the day Breaking Dawn comes out."

"Oh," I whispered.

"Harry, where have you been?" someone interrupted. Oh, it was her. Catalina Howell. She looked at me for a second, then back at him.

"I just texted you, but you didn't reply. You said this morning you would walk me home and stay over at my house to study."

"Oh, right. I forgot," he said to her. Turning towards me, he said "I'll see you later. Bye." I waved back. Catalina also waved . "Bye, Kelly." What? That was strange. The first time she spoke to me.

I shut the locker, turned around and left. I just wished he knew I was falling madly in love with him, and that he was going crazy for me too. I wasn't sure, though. I mean, he was showing some signs, otherwise, why did he even come to me in the first place. Was he interested in me?

O, how I wish I knew what he thought about me. It was as if I was invisible. Can't he see I have feelings for him? Or was that the reason why he came over? Did he have feelings for me too? No, I guess not. It was me who started the conversation we had, though he was the one who first greeted me.

There just seemed to be a possibility between me and him.

Trivia

  • The first four paragraphs were written after the next three, so that should tell you that those three paragraphs were going to be the beginning.
  • This songfic has underwent two changes
  • I begun writing this May 21, 2013. I had been asking for help on dialogue, and one person said that if I like, I could give it her to look at and see what she could do. Of course, I was too impatient because she was busy. It's just that dialogue is so hard for me, mostly on the male gender perspective.
  • I first heard Tiffany's song shortly before May 9, 2013. This was when I became infatuated with Prince Harry.
  • I named the male character after Prince Harry of Wales (or His Royal Highness the Prince Henry). Not just is the character in the story the most popular and handsome guy in school, but Prince Harry is considered the most eligible bachelor in the world, not just in Britain. Of course, that will change when he is married.
  • The last two sentences of paragraph 7 was a reference to me. Literally, that's what I did whenever I saw pictures of Prince Harry.
  • In Tiffany's music video, there seems to be almost nobody in the hallway, so I used an excuse for that in the story: a certain movie.
    • The music video was posted on YouTube in February, but Breaking Dawn was released in November of that year. Since this is a story, the timeline doesn't really matter.
  • I've been home-schooled my whole life. I have no idea what it's like in public school, but there are a lot of depictions of it on television.